I found your small details to be the most interesting. Such as the element next to the outlet and the corner wall page turn. It's your perspective and things that you found in the text and then again translated into an original design. I would say push this more. Also you have some very nice type treatments that make the more traditional lock ups fall back. Keep it funky~ it works.
I was really digging the use of language. I though it was smart and effective. I liked how you took the system L.C. designed for his use of language and translated/ interpreted that into a space. To me one of the more effective applications was how you directly translated to parts of the book to the space. I feel like the collateral could of been pushed a bit more, but I thought the design of the poster was effective and fresh too.